Monday, 2 November 2015

SE story monday: NaNoWriMo, anyone?

quote [ On November 1, participants begin working towards the goal of writing a 50,000-word novel by 11:59 PM on November 30. ]

Anybody else on SE doing NaNoWriMo this year? I wasn't planning on it, but the second half of my current project is going to be just over 50k words, and I paused right before November at the halfway point. So I figured, what the hell. Why not?

I figure we might as well make a thread for people to post excerpts, ask for advice, commiserate about how our damn jerbs are eating up our time that we should be spending writing, etc.

I've been working on a cyberpunk themed pulp serial that I'm planning on releasing in 2.5k-ish word pieces via podcast. Here's an excerpt that I wrote in the last twenty four hours.

Reveal

“Yeah. I’ll definitely need to study it when we get home. For now, I need to stop by a store real quick, get an adapter for the hard drive so I can keep crunching bits while I walk without having my fingers stuck in my pocket. We can grab an extra set of goggles for you.”

I shook my head. “Just when I got used to this one. They probably won’t have this model anymore.”

The owner of the shop gave us some funny looks when we came in. I guess we did look more than a bit disheveled. And since this was the Shadow Market, the odds that he didn’t have illegal hardware in the back were slim to none. So I didn’t blame him for being a little twitchy. But Chance found his adapter and I found some goggles that synced up fine to my Wave and almost sat right on my face.

After walking several blocks to get to the Shadow Market, we decided to splurge and spend a couple of extra creds on a pedicab to get to the Westren building. A girl who was built a lot like me, but with much darker skin and tight braids pulled up on a little electric bike with a rickshaw attached to the back. She also had a set of goggles almost exactly like the pair I was mourning. I was tempted to ask if she wanted to trade.

Chance tapped his credstick against her meter. “Westren building,” he said.
She responded with a thick Jamaican accent that I’m not even going to try to duplicate. Chance threw back a few words in I dunno, Creole or Patois or whatever. I didn’t even think to ask if he knew it, or if he looked it up on the fly while he was talking. While we rode, I tested out my new goggles and looked up some info on the Westren building.

The bottom floor of the building was almost like a mini mall. A few stores, a few bars masquerading as family restaurants. The bottom floor was one of the cleaner places in the Shadow Market.

Above that, however, the old office complex had been turned into a series of small independent businesses. There could be literally anything up there from budding young entrepreneurs sleeping in cots in the back room of their startup companies, to chained up illegal immigrants sewing knockoff jeans, to high-tech (and likely illegal) surgical facilities. It was tiny compared to the Markhov tower, but there were truck bays and a freight elevator in the back. Anything that could physically fit through a double wide door could be made, modified, or transferred through businesses here.

“I don’t know where he went in the building,” Chance said. “Their internal cameras are on a closed network.”

“You can hack into it, though, right?”

He gave me a look.

“You know what I mean,” I said. “Once we get there. Obviously, I’m not expecting you to miraculously hack into a closed network from here.”

I think he blinked at me from under his AR goggles, but it was hard to tell. “Actually, I probably could if I had time to get into a nearby network and go from there. Anyway, once we’re there, we need to get close enough to somebody connected to the network that I can get their key.”

“Just a walk-by?” I asked, “or are we gonna have to actually stand around and talk?”

“If you wan’ stand around,” the driver said, “I can wait. Only a cred a minute.”
Chance smiled at her and said, “No, I think we’re good.”

He tapped his credstick to hers to transfer a tip, and we headed into the Westren building.

“Anytime you wan’ ride,” she said to us, “jus’ call me.”

My new goggles popped up a couple of messages. One ad blip from her with her Wave info. And another message telling me that I have yet to set up my FriendNet account. Stupid bloatware must have come pre-installed on the goggles. I had Chance take the damn thing out of my Wave when I first got it. That last thing I need is a new way for people to find me on the net.
[SFW] [literature] [+4 Good]
[by Tirade@8:03pmGMT]

Comments

Jack Blue said @ 8:46pm GMT on 2nd Nov
I've been torturing myself with this for the past two days. I have no idea what to write about.
Ankylosaur said @ 9:32pm GMT on 2nd Nov [Score:1 Funny]
A guy who tortures himself.
mechanical contrivance said @ 9:45pm GMT on 2nd Nov
I wonder how many stories have been written about writer's block.
ooo[......7 said[1] @ 10:07pm GMT on 2nd Nov
I wonder how many good stories have been written about writer's block.
Tirade said @ 10:20pm GMT on 2nd Nov
I've seen at least one in comic form (this particular strip is SFW, but most of the rest of oglaf.com is not, fair warning.)
Dienes said @ 12:21am GMT on 3rd Nov
Well Stephan King has written....oh.
Tirade said @ 10:16pm GMT on 2nd Nov
Yeah, I kind of cheated, since I have a serial halfway done. I'm only counting my word count as of November 1st, of course.

However, I reached the end of what I had planned out before November started. So I'm kind of pantsing it from here. :)
spleen23 said @ 12:03am GMT on 3rd Nov
how about?
sexually transmitted gender changing disease that you can only catch once, fall out to main character catching it and effects on society

breakdown of society as a aliens arrive, not as refugees or for conquest, but just to sell highly advanced stuff on a individual level with out bothering to deal with governments.

detective solving crimes committed by a group of recently made homeless who have decided to literally eat the rich
lilmookieesquire said @ 2:00am GMT on 3rd Nov
Writers block transferred as an std and you can write about each person.
HP Lovekraftwerk said @ 2:17am GMT on 3rd Nov
So can anyone point me to an easily-understood and successful outline for a novel? I'm a fan of the Dresden Files, the Expanse series, Terry Pratchett, (most) Stephen King, and Hugh Howey's Wool cycle (though I've found his novel "Sand" rather wanting), if those are any indications of what I've read and enjoyed recently.

I keep seeing these weird models (I think someone had a snowflake-based novel outline, which made little to no sense) or pages of hand-written gobbledygook that looks like an epileptic tried to draw a spreadsheet (I think it was from JK Rowling). Is there a fairly simple, straightforward example of a plot outline that later became a novel, or is it all just a "throw it at the wall and hope you wind up with something coherent" thing most of the time?
arrowhen said[1] @ 3:53am GMT on 3rd Nov [Score:1 Underrated]
Tirade said @ 4:08am GMT on 3rd Nov
Heh, I think you posted this right around the time I wrote the name 'Michael Moorcock' on my own post. Timing. :)
krupa said @ 3:35pm GMT on 3rd Nov
hehey! This was posted to old SE! Coolio!
hellboy said @ 2:33am GMT on 3rd Nov
Joseph Campbell's Twelve-Step Hero's Journey is a pretty well-trod path. Probably too well-trod, IMO, but hey, it's NaNoWriMo - the goal is to be done, not to be good, so whatever works.
hellboy said @ 2:36am GMT on 3rd Nov
(Personally I'm a bigger fan of starting with a really good what-if and just seeing where it takes you, outlines be damned. I find outlines more useful in the re-writing stages or for mapping out where things need to go when you're painted into a corner.)
robotroadkill said @ 2:45am GMT on 3rd Nov [Score:1 Original]
What if rich businessmen paid big money to be shrunk down for "microsafari" hunts where they were pitted against rotifers, amoebae, stentors, and other horrifying creatures?

Hmm, maybe that's b-movie fodder rather than novel material. Anyway, I'll never bother writing it, so there you go. You'll need to take lots of artistic license with the physics of being that small.
Tirade said @ 4:04am GMT on 3rd Nov
Randy Ingermanson's snowflake method actually makes a lot of sense. I don't use it in its entirely, but I did take a few ideas from it when I figured out the best way to plot out my first NaNoWriMo novel. The general idea is to come up with a single topic sentence. Then break it down further into a paragraph. Then break it down into four paragraphs. It's a way of fractally expanding it and figuring out how to populate and fill in everything that has to happen for the story to work.

If you're looking for more the 'hero's journey' beat sheet style plotting method, then you can either go with the Campbell twelve step journey that hellboy mentioned up above, or with Blake Snyder's 'Save the Cat!' beat sheet, or Adron Smitley's 'A Stranger Comes to Town'. Those work well for generic adventure/hero's journey stories, but of course, if your idea isn't one of those, then stretching it to fit those beat sheets will just make for a weird, bland, nonsensical story.

Personally, I tend to write pulp, so I go with the 4 act structure used by many pulp authors. It's basically a more broken down version of the typical movie 3 act structure. With the 4 act structure, you basically break the story down into quarters. The first quarter is your introduction to the character, the setting, and whatever trouble they're getting into. The second act is when they're first getting into whatever trouble they're dealing with. The third act is when shit hits the fan and they get in so deep that they can't back out, they have to power through to the end in order to survive. And the last act is that struggle to survive. It's a structure that works for short stories, a la Lester Dent, or longer ones, like Michael Moorcock's early pulp.

Basically, the search to outline your book is usually a series of breaking down what you need in order to make the book work on every level. As a coherent plot, as a driving and interesting story for the reader, and as a driving force to keep the characters realistically going along. Different types of stories will require different types of structure behind them to make them work on those levels.

With my first NaNoWriMo novel, I was thinking about publishing it serially via podcast. I ended up doing a fractal structure. The book is the introduction to the series and world, and I can easily see myself writing it as a quadrilogy. The book itself has four acts. Each act has four long chapters. And each chapter has four mini-acts that are short enough to fill a 10-15 minute podcast.

That setup didn't quite work for the current project I'm working on. But this one I'm half pantsing, rather than going solely on an outline. But that's just as well, because this story has different needs than the previous one. The previous one was a third person fantasy epic. This one is a gritty, first person noir style cyberpunk dystopian story.
Tirade said[1] @ 4:07am GMT on 3rd Nov
Oh, another thing I did for the outline on my first NaNo attempt that I actually forgot about until I just went back to look at the outline. :P Once I finished the outline, I went through each chapter and wrote in what function each chapter fulfilled in the book. What it did for the plot, for the characters, and for the readers. Mostly because I remember reading a few books from authors who I enjoyed, but who in their later books started to ramble on in certain parts, leaving huge plot swaths that deviated from the main plot and delivered absolutely fuck-all.

I'm looking at you, third Ringworld book.
JWWargo said @ 4:00am GMT on 3rd Nov
Best of luck in reaching that damned goal!

Most I've ever written in one stretch was 20k words in about 10 days, but generally I'm a slow writer. I'll be heading back to Hawaii for a couple months pretty soon here and I'm going to flesh out a couple book ideas while there, maybe even complete one of them.

One is a coming-of-age story about 3 teenage boys living in an isolated small town that is known for yearlong clear blue skies, and how everything is effected by the appearance of a cloud. Working title is CLOUDY. (I suck at titles)

The other is a relationship drama set in a near-future world where apathy and nihilism has become the norm. The female half of the protagonists attempts to change for the male half and ends up becoming a giant feline statue that threatens to destroy the world. Working title is BEING UPSET AS THE SOUL OF IT. (I dunno, I haven't thought that one out fully yet, I'll play with it more)
Tirade said @ 4:14am GMT on 3rd Nov
Heh. I don't really care about reaching the goal, this is a story I'm gonna finish in a reasonable amount of time anyway. I'm intending to publish it as a serial, hopefully at least one podcast every other week. I've got twenty eisodes written, but I'd love to get ahead of myself and finish writing the whole novel/season as soon as possible.
arrowhen said @ 5:55am GMT on 3rd Nov
Most years I start telling myself around August that this is the year I'll actually get around to writing something... and then forget all about it until, like, November 27th.

This year I actually remembered at the appropriate time, but I'm not even remotely motivated. I think I'm going to try to spend the month writing a video game instead.
Tirade said @ 6:31am GMT on 3rd Nov
Is there a month for that? I know February is 'write a music album' month, although I don't remember what the official name of it is.
Silent said @ 7:05am GMT on 3rd Nov
I think the indie game scene has moved into the quick prototyping type event instead of a month long project, which I can understand as if you're limiting yourself in time you'll never make a polished game, and giving yourself too much time would just mean a lot of sitting around doing nothing.
Tirade said @ 4:18pm GMT on 3rd Nov
Well, if the serial I'm writing actually does get popular, I may very well decide to find a few decent pixel artists and make a Prince of Persia style sidescroller based on it. :P

... okay, I'm also lazy enough that I may find a scripter/programmer so I don't have to do all of that too.
Silent said @ 7:02am GMT on 3rd Nov
I always plan to take part but either I forget til a week into November, or I fail yo hit the targets and let myself get down about it and give up, this year I am writing but instead of aiming for targets I am just using Nanowrimo as a sort of prompt to try and write every day, if I get anywhere close to the target then huzzah, if not then I am at least writing.
And most of these ideas can be upgraded for a better project when I have more time.

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